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Angel in Flight
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since 2001-01-07

Posts 381

0 posted 2001-01-28 02:17 PM

The clouds entwine heavens gate, the golden wings of angels dust as it hits
the fairy plane.
The feathers rise, the wind begins, the tears, the cries, the storm of sin.
The lightening bolt, the thunder roar. The angels fly as the rain begins to
pour.
They lift their heads above the sky. Rampaging around as they cry!
The tempest thrashes amist the gate. Hold back Satan!!!!............ Hold back
hate!!!!
The angels thrust there mighty steed forward march until they bleed.!!
The mist arise, the clouds of sin, Satan hold back you can not win.
The twister emerges above the sky. Angels now!!!! Fight!! FLY!!!
The volcano erupts the intensity within. Angels now defeat the sin.
Hold back Satan hold back hate. We can not allow them through thy gate.
Army arise the sound of fear. Satan beware for angels are here.
The swords clash, the thunder roar, the spears thrown, the lightening sore.
The clouds blacken, the sea of doom, who will live to see the sun loom?
The devil is thrown upon the sea. The tide explodes and engulfs his body.
The clouds of light shine again, and the angels sing praise for their win.
The thickened clouds depart the sky. The rain evolves and a rainbow emerges
upon high.
The angels wings spread once more and the fairy dust hits the floor.
The golden gate of love on high, shall rake forever, and maintain peace
amongst the sky.
The clouds entwine heavens gate, the golden wings of angels
dust....................................... as it hits the fairy plane.
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What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda

[This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 01-28-2001).]

~*Buffy Summers*~
Junior Member

since 2000-11-30

Posts 24
Avondale,AZ,USA

1 posted 2001-01-28 05:15 PM

Hey Gurl... I loved your poem. It was pretty. So modern and very sweet. I liked it alot. LYLAS

Kim Rayann

anomaly187
Member

since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

2 posted 2001-01-28 05:33 PM

...all atheist knowledge aside lol..this is a very vivid poem about the angels triumph over satan(good vs. evil)...you definately have a talent with words..every description of the fight held me reading..great job on this

"When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro"

HiddenSparklez
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2001-01-28 08:39 PM

Great description... love the angel parts.

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-01-28 11:20 PM

This was great. I liked it a lot Angel.......Go GOOD! Down with BAD!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-01-29 02:05 PM

You are a wondefull story teller. Seems like you have captured such an imagination from readers minds when you tell your narations in writing. This is very enchanting Amanda.....

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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