Teen Poetry #4 |
Goodnight sweet child of mine. |
Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Close your eyes now and go to sleep, Child of mine, may you have pleasant dreams Let the little sand man work his magic, And take you to the land of fantasies. Goodnight, Sweet child of mine. Goodnight, Sweet child of mine. Goodnight, Sweet child of mine. Sweet child of mine. Let me read you a bed time story, Child of mine, count the sheep’s don’t worry You will soon be in fairytale land, Maybe even together with Peter Pan. Goodnight, Sweet child of mine. Goodnight, Sweet child of mine. Goodnight, Sweet child of mine. Sweet child of mine. Goodnight, ( Goodnight ) Sweet child of mine. ( oooh ) Goodnight, ( pleasant dreams ) Sweet child of mine. ( child of mine ) Goodnight, ( sleep tight ) Sweet child of mine. Sweet child of mine. Goodnight, ( Goodnight ) Sweet child of mine. ( oooh ) Goodnight, ( pleasant dreams ) ( Goodnight ) Sweet child of mine. ( child of mine ) yeah Goodnight, ( sleep tight ) ( sweet child of mine ) Sweet child of mine. ( Goodnight ) Sweet child of mine. ( Goodnight ) Sweet child of mine. ( until fade ) |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
reminds me of the guns n roses song good work |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey kool...yeah i agree with ina it reminds me of sweet child o mine. also of metallica's enter sandman. did you get inspiried by any songs? i'm curious to know cause i do a lot. great poem by the way, thanks for sharin. later -fear- |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
it REALLY reminds me of that song by Guns n Roses, so I totally agree with Ina, but good none the less.. you must be really inspired by songs. I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
the topic you wrote on is very similar to what i wrote...hehehe intertesing how that ahppnes...i enjoyed this one alot...bye im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This really reminded me of a Guns & Roses song. Anyway, I really enjoyed this one. I liked it a lot. You write really good songs, but do you write the music to it aswell?! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
beautifully written song my friend I'm not gonna mention anymore what it reminded me of everyone already did keep it up hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
very sweet, and the guns & roses reminder is not a bad thing! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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