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layla
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0 posted 2001-06-14 02:48 PM



he disconnected his cell his home phone and his aol account... he's leaving today and he'll take my heart with him
I never had a love so real as it is now
I will love him forever
i will wait for him forever
until then i too will be disconnected

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1 posted 2001-06-14 03:56 PM


Aaww! That's sad. I really hope things work out for you. Just keep in mind that it won't hurt forever.

Rhonda  

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2 posted 2001-06-14 05:20 PM


This is really sad.  You seem to be taking things better than the way others would take this same situation.  Stay strong and keep sharing

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3 posted 2001-06-14 05:28 PM


so sad....I felt this....tenderly done  
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4 posted 2001-06-14 05:58 PM


sad...i hope things work out ...until then keep writing..

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5 posted 2001-06-14 09:28 PM


That really is no fun. Heart breaking. I hope all works out. Enjoyed the read

If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive.

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6 posted 2001-06-16 02:56 AM


Great job here, but the sadness is so strong. Let time heal you, don't disconnect from the world.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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