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0 posted 2001-06-13 10:48 PM



I hate the way you ignore me now
And the way you walk right by
I hate how you don't ever call
Or maybe that you don't even try.

You say it's different now
Because of what I said,
I apologized a million times
But those sorrys now are dead.

I wanted things to stay
Just like they were before,
But you said they could never be
As you walked right out my door.

I hollered out one last thought
Before this whole thing turned bad,
Sometimes the hardest thing to get over
Is something you never had.

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

© Copyright 2001 Valerie - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-13 11:33 PM


i truly liked the ending thought...great job on expressing yourself throughtout...i enjoyed it a lot ...bye Val

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2 posted 2001-06-14 01:52 AM


"Sometimes the hardest thing to get over
Is something you never had."

don't I know it.......
great way of putting it too
*sigh*
great poem  
~SEA

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3 posted 2001-06-14 09:12 AM


Oooooh I feel ya. And nice job on the quote at the end. I really completely agree with that. This was really well written, very emotional. Keep writing for us!!

Jenn


"If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie.. beside you as you dream, if my heart had wings." Faith Hill

[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 06-14-2001).]

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4 posted 2001-06-14 09:28 AM


Yea i feel ya too...its so annoying when this happens...Good poem tho..you really got your feelings across. Nice job  
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5 posted 2001-06-16 03:24 AM


The line SEA quoted was good.....and yea it's so true. I understand this very well... sometimes the unreachable is the most missed.
I enjoyed this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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