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stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

0 posted 2001-06-13 09:06 PM

I have never been so happy,
as the day I laid eyes on you,
you may ask why I get so happy,
it's because of a love so true

I wander in your dreamy eyes,
and see your glowing face,
the love your tender kiss implies,
keeps me in your warm embrace.

I'll hold you in my arms all night,
for I never want to let you go,
when I'm around you it feels so right,
because I know I love you so.

A beauty lays resting in my arms,
her halo shines out bright,
awake she uses loving charms,
my angel in the night.

I love being in your gentle arms,
and feeling your sweet caress,
being with you I'm safe from harm,
and you temper my distress.
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Ok, I want to thank you Zu for adding on to this poem (after all, every other stanza is yours...ya know, the better stanzas of the poem..), and really helping me out...you really add a neat perspective to it...you made it a WHOLE lot better than I could have myself.

[This message has been edited by stace_co2003 (edited 06-13-2001).]

chasing rain
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since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

1 posted 2001-06-13 10:00 PM

*starts crying* It's so romantic...GAH! *sob* I'm not kidding! *wipes a tear from her eye, from embarassment she will die...* Wow, i rhymed.

DO MORE COLLABERATIONS!!! It works well. get my...drift??? (ok, i shut up now...)

-Leah

I heard a funny quote once...*scratches head* It went like this...
So, this guy walks into a bar...OW!!! :)

DarkAngelOfTheStars
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since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

2 posted 2001-06-13 10:09 PM

ahh can someone pass the tissues? hehe aww this was great stacy and Zu and i thought it was great all together good job....so sweet

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

cherish
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since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

3 posted 2001-06-13 10:56 PM

AWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!..this is so beutiful you guys...

...its so romantic and sweet one of the most romantic poems i have ever read on pip!!...good job..you guys work wonders together...

...so where are the tissues?...keep em coming you two..

..a collab by two great poets..i love this!!...this is going into my library..

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-06-13 11:36 PM

...hehehe...this was a very sweet and beautiful emotions

...i really liekd it and hope to see you and Zu work together sometime soon again

...great job you two!...as i hope tos ee more...bye Stace and Zu

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

5 posted 2001-06-14 12:32 PM

WOO! This LoveBug's lovin this! I always love a good love poem, and this is a very good one. Great work, you two!

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-06-14 01:45 AM

wonderful job you two!! I enjoyed this

~SEA

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

7 posted 2001-06-14 06:47 AM

Hey Stace it was a pleasure working with you and I'm just happy we did it and I enjoyed working with an excellent poet.
*Hugs*
Zu

"Death solves all problems, no man, no problem" J.V.Stalin 1918.

fractal007
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since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

8 posted 2001-06-14 10:27 AM

Stace and Zu:

Impressive job here. Stace, I don't mind the rhymes in this poem. You're not too bad yourself. Both of u did a very good job, both with imagery and form.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

the_rescue
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since 2001-05-23

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Japan