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Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-06-12 06:40 PM


You have a girlfriend,
Us, has came to a end.
After all we've been through,
you still can't say, "I love you".
Since you were just here for sex,
I guess you better run back to your ex.
Cause I'm here for the love of two people,
Not for you, you hung our love on top the steeple.
But how can I say no to you?
You flouded my body like a deadly flu.
You came and stole away my heart,
But now i think we must depart.
For our love is fake,
and we'll do this for each other's sake.....

fall hard, practice harder not to fall

© Copyright 2001 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-12 07:48 PM


Wow well I guess one of those guys just wasn't there for the right reasons. That's really sad. I hope all goes well for you in the end.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

the_rescue
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since 2001-05-23
Posts 316
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2 posted 2001-06-13 09:16 AM


that was a really good poem sorry about the situation man us guys can be real jerks cant we.  I liked how you expressed yourself though Goood job

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over.  (SPOKEN)

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3 posted 2001-06-13 12:54 PM


That is so sad!!   Very good poem, though!
Rhonda  

"Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy.""Great. There goes the school."

anonymousfemale
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Limbo
4 posted 2001-06-14 12:09 PM


Indeed this is sad. I hope you came through it alright. This guy sounds like he needs a good beating.

Keep your head up.  

~AF~

Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!!

angel_2401
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Cincinnati, OH
5 posted 2001-06-14 02:07 PM


Wow, this is sad, some guys can be real jerk sometimes. I hope you can pull through!  

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30
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In a dream world
6 posted 2001-06-14 02:42 PM


really good poem. I know what you mean!! preach it!! heehee, *hugs*  

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

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