Teen Poetry #4 |
Why, God, Why? |
Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*This isn't a "religious" poem, I'm just trying to find some answers, and right now I'm trying to find them from God Why, God, Why? Why do I love him? Why did he hurt me? It's not fair. Did he tell the truth When he said he still Loves me? Why, God, Why? Why HIM, of all people? Why am I suffering? It's so not fair. Did I tell the truth When I told him I Love him? Why, God, Why? Why can't things be different? Why did things have to change? It's just not fair!!! Could I have stopped Myself from falling in Love with him? Why, God, Why? Why can't things be fair? Why can't life be fair? Why does he have theses problems? Why did I let him play me? Why, God, Why? Why didn't I see it coming? I knew his reputation, right? Why did I fall for a friend? Why did I let this happen to me? Why, God, Why? Why can't I cry? Why can't I cry when that's all I want to do? Why does it hurt so much? Does it always hurt? Why, God, Why? Why can I not express what I'm feeling? Why do people around me not understand? Why do they just give me advice? Why don't they just listen? Why, God, Why? Why can't I just get over him? Why do I love him so much? Why did he love me so much? Why am I letting this hurt me? Why, God, Why? Why do people say it gets easier every time? Why do they think it hurts less the third time? Why did I set myself up for this? Why? Why, God, Why? Why did this happen when we were so happy? Or did he lie about that, too? It was hard, yes, but... How can he lie so convincingly? It was in his eyes, God, I SAW it. He didn't lie to me about it He did love me. As close as a week ago he loved me. Did it change? Is it her he's playing? Why do I not want that? I don't want him to play anyone. I don't want anyone else hurt like I am right now We've been seperated for months Why does it hurt more now than then? God he DOES love me! So why are we separated? God please. Help him. Help ME. Please God, I want the pain to go. It hurts so much I just can't bear it. Please God, let me cry. Let me work this out with him Please God, let him phone so I can Say good-bye or whatever needs to be said. Please. "Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy." |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
WELL, since it's not a "religious" poem, I won't give a "religious" reply. Honestly though, it's my "firm belief" everything happens for a reason...if they didn't...why would anything happen at all? You may not believe it now, but EVENTUALLY, no time limits, everything will work out alright. All I can say is trust your heart or gut or whatever it is you've trusted before. Just hold on If ya ever need advice(like real advice) or someone to listen, lemme know Bel |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Thanks, I appreciate it, and I'll keep your offer in mind. Rhonda |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow, this had a lot of emotion built up within the poem. Good luck with everything. Hope all gets well soon. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Ahem. You stole my name ... ... guess that means you'll have to live up to it, eh..? Nice to meet you, Rhonda -- I'm Linda. I'll be keeping an eye out for your work! L |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Wow, this is very touching, I enjoyed reading it. This is the first poem of yours I have read, so I am going to put it in my library because I liked it so much. Keep posting and writting until your next master work -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
wow that was a really good poem, keep your hope in getting back with the guy but don't let that consume you. the rescue in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN) |
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