navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #4 » Why YOU???
Teen Poetry #4
Post A Reply Post New Topic Why YOU??? Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Skyfire
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381
Riding

0 posted 2001-06-11 05:10 PM


Why YOU???

Why did you choose me to play?
I trusted and you hurt
Why did I have to fall in love?
You lied and I believed
Do you really love me
or did you just say that?
I should trust you, but I can't
Not now, not for a long time
If you would TALK to me, we could
Straighten everything out
But you won't
So we can't
Why was I the gullible one?
We were great friends and now?
I don't know what we are
Why did I have to fall for YOU?
Why couldn't I have left it alone?
You SAY you still love me,
But why does it have to be YOU?
I still love you because
I have no resolution
I don't know what's going on
Would you just talk to me?
Please?
Even if it's for the last time...


**Hey peoples! I've been gone for a looong time, and so many things have happened to me in the past couple months, so my poetry may be a little dark for a bit while I try and get everything sorted out.

"Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy."

© Copyright 2001 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved
anonymous albert ?
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-06-11 05:30 PM


well...wb! ...and this one was quite the emtional poem...its must be hard...i hope things turn out the best for you and hope you stay around...bye Rhonda

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 06-11-2001).]

SEA
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
2 posted 2001-06-11 05:34 PM


sometimes no words need to be said...the silence is good bye enough   very well done  
Dopey Dope
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
3 posted 2001-06-12 01:34 AM


Well done......I liked this a lot!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #4 » Why YOU???

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary