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Secsyy lil angel
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since 2000-05-30

Posts 36
Portland Oregon, USA

0 posted 2001-06-11 03:42 AM

A boy who is just a dream
A boy without a face
That boy i run to everyday
Hoping the pain in my heart he will replace
With smiles instead of frowns
Laughs instead of tears
Love instead of hate
Trust instead of fears
A boy who can heal me
A boy who can make things right
That boy i run to every day
And every single night

~*Love exists only in the hearts of those who choose to acknowledge its existence...*~

*~To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.~*

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-06-11 04:27 AM

great job...i liked the way you told your feelings...i enjoyed the read

...bye Kia

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

the_rescue
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

2 posted 2001-06-11 09:26 AM

I liked the poem good right

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN)

Ina
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

3 posted 2001-06-11 09:46 AM

This was good. Your feelings were very evident. good work

Regina

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

4 posted 2001-06-11 10:18 AM

Great work I really enjoyed the read, keep sharing

Zu

keoni
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since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

5 posted 2001-06-11 03:00 PM

This is very nice. I can't wait till I can find someone that can do that for me. You expressed you feelings very nice.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

6 posted 2001-06-11 03:04 PM

aww i liked this it was great! nice job here keep it up!

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

AsBurYAnGel
Junior Member

since 2001-04-03

Posts 14
Virginia

7 posted 2001-06-11 03:06 PM

This was really good. I enjoyed it a lot.

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

8 posted 2001-06-11 05:39 PM

That was really good. I hope you find him!

Rhonda

"Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy."

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

9 posted 2001-06-11 09:01 PM

Well done here. I liked this one a lot!!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

fozzyozzy
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since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

10 posted 2001-06-11 10:11 PM

I liked it. especially the style and flow. Good job here

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