Teen Poetry #4 |
What Is With The Mind Games? |
HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
What is with the mind games? That your playing with me? Wont you just leave me alone? Can't you just let me be? What is with the mind games? You say you hate me , then you don't. Somedays you want to see me so bad, The next day you wont. What is with the mind games? You always talk about me behind my back. Somedays I wish I could see you, To give you a nice hard SMACK! What is with the mind games? You act as though your two, If you don't get your way, Whining is all you'll do. What is with the mind games? I don't want to talk to you anymore. So get the hell out of my house, And on the way out, Don't let your butt hit the door.
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
Ouch! I know whoever you wrote this for will get the message. "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
yep...girls always be doing that!...dont you hate it ...anyways...i hope you give this to the person its about ...great job!...bye Ashley i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Awesome job here. Really powerful piece....you showed him! Well I'm glad I'm not that guy cuz it seems like he got a bit of a melt down happening. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Julian L. Chester Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 50 |
i am realy feeling your poem and how u feel. but look, i came to realize no matter where u go and where u happen to be there would be someone like this that u describe in your poem playing mind games. so watch out and take care of yourself you hear and men and woman both do this so look out and look around u where ever u go. but i really loved the poem it is excellent for trying to get rid of someone who is annoying. |
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Julian L. Chester Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 50 |
i am realy feeling your poem and how u feel. but look, i came to realize no matter where u go and where u happen to be there would be someone like this that u describe in your poem playing mind games. so watch out and take care of yourself you hear and men and woman both do this so look out and look around u where ever u go. but i really loved the poem it is excellent for trying to get rid of someone who is annoying. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Someone is going to get a serious case of whip lash after reading this one... Very powerful piece here- full of emotion! I liked it alot... I can so relate! Keep posting! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I could feel your anger...hope you give this to the intended...... |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Excellent, excellent!!! That was awesome! I am so going to send that to my friend! Great work!! I really hope you show that to the intended. Believe me, you don't need the after effects of mind games. Great piece, once again!! Rhonda "Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy." |
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