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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733
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Put down the bottle Stand up and look at me Set down the glass Calm down, I didn't say anything Go to the rave Take your mom to a bar Put down the keys Want a tree wrapped around your car? But it's not hot in here No pot No h No ecstasy Can't you remember? No blow No speed No LSD You promised me No booze No huffing No ruffies I can't understand you Rehab? I have the number You get high with you mom? I'll get your dad's number Call him, drop the bomb But there's no one over there Put down the bottle Look me in the eye Are you gonna stop, Or would you rather die? Okay just a note, I have no problem with drugs, alcohol or anything of the like. Just came up with this when thinking about a friend of mine. I don't think he's into quite as many drugs as I've listed, but I just wanted to cover all ground. I'm always grateful for advice, but he doesn't listen to reason. Bel [This message has been edited by Isabel Galaxia (edited 06-10-2001).] |
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Julian L. Chester Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 50 |
hi i like your poem i hope u get around to reaed three of my poems i written. i do believe u might want to take him to the hospital no matter what he says or does and put him in one of those programs. but your poem was excellent and it makes since on what your trying to say and put out there and i feel u one that. so like i say, "SAY NO TO DRUGS." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done Isabel. SAY NO TO DRUGS. You really put out a good message here because addictions are horrible.....you may like a drug but if you do it too much you are lost and in the gutter. People can learn from this. Well done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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ethel lahootie Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 143SC, USA |
errrr...ummm....yeah. good job writing this kT! hows the summer been? wel..i cant say if u wanna talk then we'll talk in cpII but hey if ya wanna talk or do something sometime call me ok? good poem! hope that person is ok. --jo-- |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I like what you're trying to do help your friends by helping them to stop their addictions JUST SAY NO hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
I really can comment on the content. BUt it was very well written. just wanted to say people dont take roofies, unless its given to them in a drink. where a guy or gurl plans to take advantage of them [This message has been edited by Ina (edited 06-14-2001).] |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Julian- thanks much Dopey- Gracias Ethel- It's not Cal or Craig or neone you know, so don't worry!!! Yeah...don't you almost miss CPII?? (Note almost) Acire- Thanks muchacho Ina- Thanks. And yeah, I know  , really.Thanks again  |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey...i really liked this poem. kind of sad how some kids are brainwashed to think that drugs are cool, but oh well. people in my family have gone thru this, but i have learned to stay out of it. i know that seems cruel, but sometimes i think the person needs to deal with it on their own. anywayz...this was a really great poem. thanks 4 the read :-) later -fear- |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
this was SUCH a good poem, i loved it!it's going in my library!  fall hard, practice harder not to fall |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Powerful piece. It's often sad when we see someone we know deteriorate due to drugs. You've expressed yourself well and what can I say? You always write well and this piece is no exception.  ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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