Teen Poetry #4 |
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the mirror |
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quietlydying![]() ![]()
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz ![]() |
an older piece of mine. The mirror, shattered, leaves reminants of Shiny, Slender Slivers of glass blanketing the floor. Burrowing their way into my tender flesh, so ALIVE it never ceases to bleed. Venturing to the depths of the all too raw soles of my naked feet, which bear the brunt of all. - jen |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I will honestly say that I loved this piece. You expressed the pain within this poem extremely well. Wonderful job. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
yea i agree with javier......i liked this piece alot! im glad evy dragged u into joinin us here ![]() tiff ![]() “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This piece tells a lot. Very mush heart felt write. Beautiful write. keep sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
the poem was really good I like it alot and the imagery rocked in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN) |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
awesome job on expressing this...i felted it ![]() ![]() im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was really good work. hope to see more |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Jeez - holy crap. There is some stunning imagery throughout the piece that really does jolt you back to reality. Glass - it's a bitch, isn't it? anonymous penguin Consider yourself added to the hitlist. |
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