Teen Poetry #4 |
angel in disguise |
stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
He walked by his sisters room Inside he heard her cry. She was on the phone with a friend- Saying she wished she would die. Later on he soon found out her and her boyfriend had been in a fight. She had been raped by her best friends brother, Her boyfriend blamed her - it just wasn't right. suddenly he heard her cry out in pain - He quickly opened the door and walked into the room To find her laying bleeding on the floor. He called for their mom and ran out of the room picked up the phone and dialed 911 He managed to keep calm thru certain doom. He walked into her new room- she was laying in the hospital bed. he looked into her eyes, but not a word he said. She smiled at him with tears in her eyes "thank you dear brother, You're my angel in disguise" --------------------------------------- it's been a long night--I can't sleep, and this is what resulted...this and 2 other poems. [This message has been edited by stace_co2003 (edited 06-10-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this poem because although the woman tried to comit an act of shear stupidity this poem glorifies LIFE. The brother saves his sister and she thanks him for that, and thus it simply says that LIFE is GOOD. I enjoyed this poem greatly. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Ditto to Dopey. You keep wowing me with these pieces, Stacy. Keep 'em coming. ~AF~ Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!! |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Err Wow... great stuff Stace... well done, keep sharing Zu "Death solves all problems, no man, no problem" J.V.Stalin 1918. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
wow...i really liekd this piece...meaningful ...*hands her some sleeping pills* ...bye Stace i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
aww, thanks Dopes and thanks Zu... and thank you Alberta for the pills!! I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
Stace, girl, this is so good. It makes you think about who is your angel in disguise. Keep it up! (I love dolphins, remember?) I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Impressive. Always gotta love those late night poems that come out in that time. Good work here. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Life isn't always good but anyway this was a great poem.Keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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