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Crash&Burn
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since 2001-01-18
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0 posted 2001-06-10 01:08 AM


here's I lil something I made up just now.

I haven't posted in some time
yet this is no surprise
since my poems often lack
that little bing-bang
Now it's the nightime
and I'm really bored
this is no good
maybe you'll snore
I wont give up so easily
thought my thoughts are now real cheesee
yet the tides might change
and tomorrow new inspiration will be at sway.



I see the darkness coming all is bleak...

© Copyright 2001 Crash&Burn - All Rights Reserved
fozzyozzy
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since 2001-03-15
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Lessburg Virginia
1 posted 2001-06-10 01:12 AM


Insomnia isn't that bad.  I've never met someone whose mind wasn't "blah" at some time or another.  I just wait for a sunset or something like rain for inspiration (totally cheesee).

"This is cactus land!!!"-T.S.Eliot

Crash&Burn
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2 posted 2001-06-10 01:17 AM


lol well see poems like that one up there only are created in the depths of pure boredom so when the nothingness has you, you just come up with well "blah"

anyways thanx for posting

I see the darkness coming all is bleak...

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3 posted 2001-06-10 04:38 AM


Mira jorge.....que hay papi? Estas bien?....sabes que te quiero mucho, verdad?!

Te quiero chingar! Si! Soy pato!
Adios!

Y jorge, no digas nada a nadie aqui en pip oka? Tenemos que hablar en espanol....solamente en espanol....


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Crash&Burn
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4 posted 2001-06-10 11:55 AM


ok
y pq quieres hablar en espaƱol, para tripearte a la gente?
y no no me chingas porfavor

I see the darkness coming all is bleak...

Crash&Burn
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5 posted 2001-08-06 07:27 PM



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