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A reminder of a friend
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A reminder of a friend |
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Crash&Burn Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 119 |
This poem I'm going to show to you guys is something I wrote not long ago, and it reminds me of a dear friend of mine who's going away to college. I'll miss him alot, and throughout all our times together I never got tired of his goofy ways and I come to realize in things we think alike, thanks for always being there. Dopes this one is for you. Will writing this poem I actually visualized you performing the actions described in the poem and I really enjoyed writing it, I hope you all enjoy reading it... Spare Change: Jingling at the bottom of my pocket I hear the sound of bumping trickets still these trickets are not trickets at all they are quarters, dimes, and nickels that I hear call. I find myself amused by the beat of these, I shake my booty as a treat yet I find the sound soon at end. My eye catches a soda machine, and a COKE I must get.  I see the darkness coming all is bleak... |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
hehe... i liked it crash..graet job and u cant say anything bout dopey and his coke  nice tribute.. bet u dopey likes it.. anyways..cya and keep writing  ps..wheres my tribute my friend  ..hehe jus kiddin  ... . . no really tho where is it!  death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
haha... Albert, relax bro. C&B, cute poem. I'm sure he'll love it to bits. Yeah, Javier and his coke... where would he be without it?  It must sound bad to say "my friend is a COKE addict." But hey, that's our Javier. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Crash&Burn Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 119 |
well and I thought more people were going to see this....but thanx to those who read... I see the darkness coming all is bleak... |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was very kool. Very funny and nice tribute to Javier. Its nice to see your posts again. REgina "Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
so in a thank u way.. what bout a tribute poem 2 "anonymous albert ?"  yea...YEA!!  ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-28-2001).] |
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Crash&Burn Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 119 |
No no more tributes lol Javier got this as a freebie cause I dunno I realized after I wrote it that the poem itself reminded him to me I see the darkness coming all is bleak... |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
jus kiddin man.. i was jus playin around... it koo ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that was good....really good hehe! Aren't friends the best??? Keep up the awesome work, k??? Luv Always, ~*~SweetStuff~*~ SuMdAy U'll CrY 4 mE bUt I wOn'T cRy 4 U, sUmDaY U'll MiSs Me LiKe I MiSsD U, SuMdAy Ull nEeD mE LiKe I nEeDed U, sUmDaY U'll lUv Me BuT I wOn'T LuV U |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Jorge, this sucked! I hated it! Haha no i'm playin! I liked it. You showed it to me in school and I gave you that kiss, remember? On the lips! hahaha...... ok no. but anyway......yer a sweetie.....and NO PEOPLE! I don't shake my booty to the spare change in my pocket! AND YES! I do love coke! And I am a coke addict......don't forget Gloe and Crazk! haha ok bye!  |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hehe, this was very cute.  Javi rawks doesn't he? Heh, well smilez!~Carly "Your joy is your sorrow unmasked. And the self-same well from which your laughter rises was often-times filled with your tears." ~Kahil Gibran |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Good job on the poem, it's a nice tribute "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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Crash&Burn Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 119 |
lol no Javier does not rock in fact I don't even know y I talk to him sometimes he can be annoying MEAN and even REAK! hahaha and god no I'm tired of this being called a tribute its like putting dope on a pedestal and worshiping him, no Javier I'm sorry your not a god or anything so don't even try to reply with some smart spiffy comment, anyways this is just a lil something that reminds me off him thats it I added the whole other I'll miss you #$%^& afterwards cause he is leaving and all that lol, well that was it carry on ppl.... I see the darkness coming all is bleak... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Isn't he sweet?  |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I think you mean Pepsi "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Crash&Burn Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 119 |
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