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Maybe I'll Tell You...Someday
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Maybe I'll Tell You...Someday |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
I barely even know you, But I like you so much. Everyday, and everynight, I am longing for your touch. I wish I could tell you, Exactly how I feel. How I shake when your around, And how my heart you steal. But, to do this it is hard, When all you talk about is her. How you used to like her, Then last month your feelings returnd. She treats you like dirt, And kicks you around. She uses you for things, But still your feelings are bound. I could treat you better, I can make you laugh. Unlike her, I don't treat you like my staff. I would never use you, And I wouldn't treat you like dirt. I wouldn't brake your heart, I would never make you hurt. So my feelings in my heart, Is where they will have to stay. Hoping you'll get over her, Maybe I'll tell you... someday.
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was really good. There is always that i could...this and that....the sidelines are a never fun position to be at Regina |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
heartfelt poem...this is a very hard situation...i hope things get better and soon it will come when you'll be able to tell him  ...bye Ashley..i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I can relate to this so well! I am in this situation right now, and I know how much it hurts. I hope that you can find the courage to tell this guy how you feel. This was very well expressed. Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job! I liked this one Ash. I hope all turns out in your favor in the end!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
I like this poem. thanks for sharing. I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
I forgot to put it in my library. I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I just hope thing go your way and you finally find your happiness. Thanks for the read and keep sharing. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
i really liked this 1 alot  bye fall hard, practice harder not to fall |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
This is a good poem! I like it a lot.  Keep writing, and I hope that you can tell him how you feel one day. I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This is such an awesome feeling!! I remember feeling this all the time before me and my boyfriend now started going out. It's magical and almost unexplainable but u did a wonderful job getting your feelings out there |
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