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An Angel In Flight =`(
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An Angel In Flight =`( |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
This is directed mainly toward one person. You know who you are. An angel in flight erstwhile was you, momentarily detached wings annihilate us two. “I love you” Nevermore conceived to be, we in no configuration will be a family. We no longer fly above, for we no further preside over any love. I convicted and visualize you were a dream come true, But An angel in flight was not ever you. What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Amanda, your poem was beautiful. Allan is a boy, in my eyes who will never stop loving you. The hurt you have done to him, will always be there. I know he loves you, because he always talks about you, i can just see the smile on his face. Your poetry is beautiful and i seriously hope that you both will love each other forever and never let go. dont get angry at him for telling me. Regina |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Regina, What you say I truly hope is true. Allan, We have talked and I still believe what I had said to be true. Nothing will ever be the same again. And I believe you should fly if not for me then for you. Alot has gone on in a matter of moments. Time stands still for no one, and i dont wish you to waste your time lieing upon the sand with me. Fly and i'll watch you. Even with one wing you have the strength to sore. Do so and you will see what may become. ps.And find the strength to leave me behind. ~Amanda~ What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Oh great.........something went on behind the scenes. Well No comment here...... the poem itself.......nice.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Aww Amanda, you know how much he cares for you and he will NEVER leave you behind. He has got enough strength in him to stick by you all the way through whatever has happened. Have confidence in the situation Amanda. It can take you to unimaginable places. ~AF~ "Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment." Buddha |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
heartwarming poem Amanda you do have to remember that arguements also arise from people who care about you that's part of life, that's part of the learning process keep you head up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Alright, everyone I just wish to say that you are alll very sweet and I would like to thank all of you for your support and friendship, but there is nothing to worry about. Allan and I will always be friends, we just wont be as close as we once were. Thank you all for your consern. What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda |
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~*Buffy Summers*~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 24Avondale,AZ,USA |
Hey Nice poem, Amanda... Written very nice and angelic-like... Always like the angel you are! Well Whats more to say. Beautyfull Poem. Kim Rayann |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
wow looks like there's been trouble in paradise and i missed it all when i was gone. well i dunno if things have worked out yet, but i hope they do...good poem ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Buffy~ Thank you that was sweet. Dance queen~ Thank you. I hope so also [This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 01-28-2001).] |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Amanda dont do this to him! dont tell me to have strength!when you do not do what u preach! regina IM on aol skatergirlz14 im veery serious |
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~*Buffy Summers*~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 24Avondale,AZ,USA |
Im only telling the truth  your an angel and when Im met you u lite my day up. Thanks for even reading the poem I wrote Im glad I NOW have a friend like you...LYLAS~ Kim Rayann |
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