Teen Poetry #4 |
Nightmare |
jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Sitting bonded in this darkned tunel of love, I sit captive from not listing to God above, Leave her alone she is no right, I look back and truly was I would of listend that night. Rounding she snuggels up close, That sicking feeling hit me and I am going to blow chuncks all over the boat, She grabs my body and holds in tight, I start praying to God please save my life, SO begging contious to secure my life, And the boat stops next to a chaple of light, I start thanking GOd saying I will become a monk for my life, But the nightmare contuies she want to be my wife, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!, After hearing that I run my all my might, Because there is no way she is getting me alone tonight, So in the distance I hear a boat near I pear, So with my nikes I hop over the bazire, Running for my life going for the pear, I Hear her saying "wait dear", So faster I run leaping into the sea, Blinking for a sec I think I am finally free, But wait why is it so dark, So shoot I have been eaten by a shark, But I shark became my freind, He finally let my nightmare end. |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
I hope you like this one it is just funny and I JUST MADE IT UP so I know I can't spell so other than that enjoy. Lead me not into temptation, I can find the way there mysel |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was funny. Talk about afraid of comitment. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You have a great imagination if you just made this up It sounded like a real dream you had Very descriptive thanks for the read keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
like I said I just made it up I never had a dream like this one. . . yet! Lead me not into temptation, I can find the way there mysel |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
lol have to agree with dopey..this is a gerat post full of imagination...great work "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
Oh Jay....what am I ever going to do with you.....Great peom. ~*Malinda*~ |
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