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baby0508
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 58
Moodus, Connecticut

0 posted 2001-06-08 12:22 PM

i know this is long..but please tell me what you guys think..

The simple words you said
they tore my world apart.
the only words i dread,
spoken from your heart.

Only you had the power,
to split my heart in two.
it only takes so many words,
coming straight from you.

i never thought i'd lose you,
yet i knew the day would come.
i knew my heart would break in two,
there'd be no getting over you.

i loved you then and i still do
i always thought i trusted you
trusted that you loved me
but i guess i'll never see.

i'll never know how you felt,
i now begin to cry,
all i do is wonder,
the simple question why.

why my life has come to
an unexpected fall
why my heart is broken,
not expecting this at all.

never saw it coming
never thought it might end
i'd hope i'd never hear
you say we can't be friends.

but what was i expecting
from a love you just proved wrong
not expecting to be lonely,
or needing to be strong.

yet i need to fix these feelings
need to fix my broken heart
and begin my road of healing
that i just can't seem to start.

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

1 posted 2001-06-08 03:20 PM

I honestly really liked this one...a lot.
You expressed some powerful emotions in this one and alot of what you said hit close to my heart. Only time can heal pain..so just remember to take it one day at a time.
Always,
~Nikki~

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-06-08 04:36 PM

wow!...i related to this greatly...awesome job...i really liked this poem and it wasnt lont at all

...bye Heather

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-06-09 07:37 PM

Through time your pain will heal...I hope you get through this in a healthy way.
Well done on the poem....quite the sad one. Good luck with the future.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

4 posted 2001-06-09 11:48 PM

this poem was great, really heartfelt. (i don't know if that's a good thing, seeing how the poem is so sad) i especially liked the lines:
i never thought i'd lose you,
yet i knew the day would come.
i've felt the same way! i hope you feel better though, great job!
-fear-

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