Teen Poetry #4 |
Outside My Bedroom Window |
PiXiEpUnKeR Junior Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 49IL, USA |
Fresh cut blades and pear colored leaves uncontrollable laughter and running from bees Shoot down the ramps and jump from the swings run with the squirrels and feed every bird that sings Cool beads of sweat "Mommy just a little more!" "We still haven't decided the winner of the war!" Attack from the slide hide on the merry-go-round Sooner or later she's captured on the ground Rolling amongst the beating down heat "Kids come on! It's time to eat!" The war left at a draw they jump over the logs an undecided victory forgotten for hotdogs |
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HVNsnt82086 Junior Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 30United States |
hahaha! i loved this! it reminds me of playing when i was little, and give the vision of a perfect summer day! it's great!! "So when you feel like hope is gone, look inside you and be strong, and you'll finally see the truth...that a hero lies in you." *~Mariah Carey- Hero~ |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
aww very cute..... good job Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
haha...i liked this...very creative poem...bye i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done! Very creatively written. I liked this one! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Very nice! Good job!! Bel |
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