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PiXiEpUnKeR
Junior Member

since 2001-06-06

Posts 49
IL, USA

0 posted 2001-06-07 11:22 PM

It's so different, so free, so new
a rocky road, we've sure been through

Now I look into those eyes
forget all the tears we've cried

I'm exstatic, overjoyed
all those times of pain are void

This is US!! This is real!!
My grip on your hand says how I feel

I cant, I wont, I'll never let go
a life without you? I can not know

We're an us, we're together
we'll be hand in hand forever!

HVNsnt82086
Junior Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 30
United States

1 posted 2001-06-07 11:34 PM

this is beautiful and shows a deep love for the person it's about. keep writting!!!

"So when you feel like hope is gone, look inside you and be strong, and you'll finally see the truth...that a hero lies in you." *~Mariah Carey- Hero~

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

2 posted 2001-06-07 11:35 PM

Ah yes, the wonderful, mushy, sweet feelings of love.... that will soon be replaced with hate and bitterness......
Naaa- I'm kidding.

Sounds like you realy like this one. Hope things stay amazing for you.

It's a great feeling!
The poem was excellent by the way. I enjoyed it alot.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-06-08 12:27 PM

well wriiten on your feeling...i liked it a lot...a very nice of a feeling to have hope you hold onto it for a loooong time

...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 06-08-2001).]

DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

4 posted 2001-06-08 08:35 PM

aww soo sweet. i loved it. the best from you that i read today....ahh i think

lol great job keep it up!

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-06-10 12:21 PM

Lovely poem. I liked it a lot. I surely do hope you do not end up with hate and bitterness like Spice jokingly mentioned. That would be horrible...so good luck!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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