Teen Poetry #4 |
The Afterwards |
PiXiEpUnKeR Junior Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 49IL, USA |
It's so different, so free, so new a rocky road, we've sure been through Now I look into those eyes forget all the tears we've cried I'm exstatic, overjoyed all those times of pain are void This is US!! This is real!! My grip on your hand says how I feel I cant, I wont, I'll never let go a life without you? I can not know We're an us, we're together we'll be hand in hand forever! |
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HVNsnt82086 Junior Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 30United States |
this is beautiful and shows a deep love for the person it's about. keep writting!!! "So when you feel like hope is gone, look inside you and be strong, and you'll finally see the truth...that a hero lies in you." *~Mariah Carey- Hero~ |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Ah yes, the wonderful, mushy, sweet feelings of love.... that will soon be replaced with hate and bitterness...... Naaa- I'm kidding. Sounds like you realy like this one. Hope things stay amazing for you. It's a great feeling! The poem was excellent by the way. I enjoyed it alot. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
well wriiten on your feeling...i liked it a lot...a very nice of a feeling to have hope you hold onto it for a loooong time ...bye i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 06-08-2001).] |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
aww soo sweet. i loved it. the best from you that i read today....ahh i think lol great job keep it up! Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Lovely poem. I liked it a lot. I surely do hope you do not end up with hate and bitterness like Spice jokingly mentioned. That would be horrible...so good luck! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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