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Teen Poetry #4

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Hand Me Down
Junior Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 32
WV

0 posted 2001-06-07 08:16 PM

Sometimes we only live for the here and now.
Sometimes we're lonely.
Sometimes we feel we need a place to be grounded... or fly away again.
I will fly away again.
I feel rain pouring down.
Live again.
Here forever.
The spiral never ends.
Why are we feeling something's familiar around us?
Are we just dreaming?
Always we search for the answers but nothing is found.
We fly away again.
I will fly away again.

DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

1 posted 2001-06-07 08:47 PM

i thought this was really nice good job....sometimes i wish i could just fly away..

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

2 posted 2001-06-08 01:27 AM

Those ups and downs are what make life interesting. There's nothing like taking off again after you've been grounded for awhile. Great writing, my friend. I hope we'll see a lot more, now that it's summer!

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-06-08 01:40 AM

i liked this poem alot....something i say to myself to often...great job on writing this

...bye Jeffrey

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-06-09 07:29 PM

Not as good as some of your other work but I did like this. Hope to see more soon!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-06-12 10:58 AM

I like the positive tone to this poem. Keep it up.

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