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quitstaringatmenow Junior Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 10 |
I stand shaken and confused Feeling helpless and abused My words have no worthy meaning That's why I stand here screaming (I'm so tired of feeling trapped The more I speak; the more he laughs) As I lie broke and lonely I think thoughts of you only So many times have you made me cry Yet I shall love you 'til I die (Caged in a world stuck on appearence My words mean nothing; they lack coherence) What is it that I want to say? Why does it have to be this way? I want to cry! I want to scream! Isn't it enough to dream a sweet dream? (Why do they judge me when they know not a thing? This life is the saddest song I've had to sing) Why do you have to act so mad? Don't you know it makes me sad? You act like I have a choice My silence is my loudest voice (My bitter tears are for this life I've wasted For it's the most sour taste I've never tasted) |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
this was good. nice job and welcome to passions! ~  fall hard, practice harder not to fall |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this one. I liked this a lot! Well done!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
is this a song?  ...it sounded like one...anyways...very emotional poem/song?...i really liked how you expressed yourself  ...hope to see more...bye  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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