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the_rescue
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

0 posted 2001-06-06 09:42 AM

It's the ever present danger
met in the eyes of a stranger
looking you wonder who they are
why do there eyes show a scar
what about them makes you so mad
and at the same time makes you sad
why when you look at them do you fear
that in a split second you'll shed a tear.
you try to speak but no words come
all you hear is this faint echoing hum
the stranger mimicks your every action
and his expression matches your reaction
the stranger stares making you uncomfortable
a feeling that is yet so uncontrolable
you can look at the stranger no more
so you throw your mirror to the floor.

The_Rescue

the_rescue
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

1 posted 2001-06-06 10:23 AM

just wanted my signature on here lol

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN)

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

2 posted 2001-06-06 01:34 PM

good one hun i loved it!
robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-06-06 01:50 PM

Goooooooooood.....VERY gooooooooooooood

Hehehe

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-06-06 02:03 PM

Nice job :O)

Dr. Jo-Bizz
Member

since 2001-06-06

Posts 97

5 posted 2001-06-06 02:32 PM

I liked it. it rhymes too. I can't do that. if I try to rhyme, I never say what I intended to.

dr. jo-bizz

*bangs head against the wall in frustration*

But His word was in my heart
like a burning fire
Shut up in my bones;
I was weary of holding back,
And I could not.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-06-06 04:31 PM

great job here!! I liked this one! You did great.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

7 posted 2001-06-06 04:39 PM

wow!...this hit me HARD!!...awesome job

...i personally loved this whole poem...hope to see more!...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

8 posted 2001-06-06 04:44 PM

Great job on this.....!!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

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