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Kosetsu
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0 posted 2001-06-05 11:19 PM


Have you ever loved a person,
Like you’ve loved no other?
Have you savored their touch,
And wished for another?

Have you ever seen the way,
That their eyes sparkle in the light?
Have you ever held them close,
And wished for one more night?

Have you ever touched their face,
And adored everything you saw?
Have you ever kissed their lips,
And wished you had no flaw?

Have you ever had a love,
That ripped at the seam?
Have you ever loved a person,
And wished it wasn’t a dream?


"Eat, drink, and be merry, for tomorrow we die." - Shakespeare

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1 posted 2001-06-05 11:26 PM


yes....I have......excellent writing  
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2 posted 2001-06-05 11:37 PM


I have.....but it wasn't a dream....I liked the poem though. You write well.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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3 posted 2001-06-05 11:58 PM


you wrote this beautifully...great job...i enjoyed it a lot ...bye Adam

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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4 posted 2001-06-06 12:58 PM


Kosetsu~
This was a really great poem. You did a good job on it. I liked the way you turned it into questions. Thanks for sharing!  

"If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend."


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5 posted 2001-06-09 08:26 PM


I like poems chocked full of questions! hehe nice job...keep up the good work!
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6 posted 2001-06-09 10:03 PM


yes i have, and when i kissed my "prince charming" he turned back into a frog. great poem though...   i love it.


Valerie

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

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