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The Night is Calling
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
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"The Night is Calling" The night is calling Set me free Danger’s dance Wont’ let me be Like the wind I run Hopeing to escape My forgoten fears And loathsome fate The mirky depths Summon me Telling me to join them And my soul shall be set free For the night is calling Upon the wind Telling me That with it my pain shall end Upon this path Beneath the darkened sky Dieing slowly No matter how I try Sensing illusions Cast by the shadows Resiting tempations But how long can I last? Questioning all that’s real Not knowing what do do I wait within this darkened night For you to come And guide me home For the night is calling It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. I've learned that even when you th [This message has been edited by LoneWolf (edited 06-05-2001).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Questioning all that’s real Not knowing what do do I wait within this darkened night For you to come And guide me home For the night is calling" sometimes....we need to guide ourselves home.....  wow...great poem....I liked this ~SEA |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
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beautiful job here...and you expressed these emotions well...i really liked it ...and related...bye  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this very much. It's not your best, but it's still good.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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