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the_rescue
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0 posted 2001-06-05 08:47 AM

Your answer is incorrect
1,2,3 times you seemed to neglect
you used the thing you once called intellect
but forgot the most important thing called respect

Your answer is wrong
you wrote all your feelings down in a song
but you were standing in a place you didn't belong
and in your present state you won't last long

Your answer is discombobulated
what you once stood for has been manipulated
you took the truth, made it lie and then debated
now your a hypocrite you live different than stated

Your answer is incorrect
you made your faith retrospect
and you seemed to neglect
the most important thing, Self Respect

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1 posted 2001-06-05 09:15 AM

I really enjoyed it...good job

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2 posted 2001-06-05 01:15 PM

this was awesome hun!
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3 posted 2001-06-05 01:43 PM

this is a great piece! Enjoyed this very much

~SEA

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4 posted 2001-06-05 05:05 PM

awesome message...great job...i really liked the topics you be writing on and this one i talk and realize everyday

...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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5 posted 2001-06-05 11:22 PM

You did wonderful with this one. I enjoyed it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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6 posted 2001-06-06 01:29 AM

reminded me of Five Iron Frenzy lyrics. hmm. or maybe that's just because I think they are some of the greatest poets alive

dr. jo-bizz

But His word was in my heart
like a burning fire
Shut up in my bones;
I was weary of holding back,
And I could not.

the_rescue
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7 posted 2001-06-06 08:00 AM

Reese Rooper is the greatest poet alive

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