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LCsftball16 Junior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 39 |
to KeLicious You say he's poisioning your mind And even your thoughts You say it's something you want to leave behind Even when it's really not?? How can you say you "disappear" When all I ever see is you?(...with him) Yeah the image is crystal clear. This ventage is way past due. I hate telling you this way For everyone to see I'm waiting for the day When you quit neglecting me You're right when you said I don't understand Though everyday I dread Facing you and your "man" You know I hate the guy Yet you still bring him near me? You know I wish he'd drink bleach and die Though I'M dying... can't you see? I love being your friend Don't get me wrong Even though our friendship weakened And now we sing a sad song. I don't want empty promises from you To get yourself out of complexity I just need something true I just need you there for me is that too much to ask??? |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Your emotions shined through beautifully in this piece...great job  |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i really liked teh way you wrote it...great job...bye  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow......a lot of emotion in this one. I hope you two solve your differences.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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