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Kevin
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0 posted 2001-06-04 11:24 PM


We lived until we had to die
We loved until we had to cry
We hoped until we wondered why
But its all over now

We gave until we took away
We talked without a thing to say
We danced all night and slept all day
But its all over now

You left and I was all alone
I cried as I thought how you'd grown
And wished you well now on your own
For its all over now

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1 posted 2001-06-04 11:37 PM


this is so sad and so so sweet...I liked this a lot  
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2 posted 2001-06-05 09:19 AM


I absolutely loved this! it had so much emotion in it...truely wonderful  
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3 posted 2001-06-05 12:47 PM


I liked this a lot. I can relate to what you have written here. great job.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

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4 posted 2001-06-05 12:47 PM


I liked this a lot. I can relate to what you have written here. great job.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

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5 posted 2001-06-05 09:53 PM


This was so sad Kevin. I enjoyed it nonetheless. Well done!
I am enjoying seeing your name up on the boards more often....

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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