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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
Yesterday I was thinking of things like our friendship it's gone down the river and out the door we always fight you say I lie about things when I don't know what I lied about we once said forever but is there really a forever? until you get married I feel so horrible you don't know how I feel I cry at night sometimes you don't know how hard it is to lose you when we've been friends, lovers your not easy getting over but when we talk I get upset you always bring up your girlfriend I want to tell you shut- up about her! you say no one wants to be my friend cause I lie about everything they say I make mistakes but they forgive forgiveness is what I'm looking for in you but am I ever going to get it or am I wasting my time on it I know you were nice I know I was nice to you we had something special going now all I hear is liar when you pass me I ignore you just remember when she gets rid of you I'm not going to help you cause I'm hurt so don't come running after me |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Do you know one thing that I absolutely can't stand? It's how some human beings think that they are superior to others. Like this person in your poem. He doesn't sound like he is worth the time of day and I hope that you come through this. Stick to your guns. If you did nothing, make sure he knows it, understands it and accepts it. Take care and nice writing. ~AF~< !signature--> "Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment." Buddha [This message has been edited by anonymousfemale (edited 01-26-2001).] |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
plenty of narcisists around..this is great writing and i hope you get over this person fast.. "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Everyone lies at some point and some time he shouldn't be casting stones at you Don't make him let you feel like you're nothing or less than him stay strong thanks for the read I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
You know, he sounds childish. He feels insecure, and he's lashing out at you. Or at least that's how it appears. Go on with your life, act like you're so incredibly happy... then he doesn't win. Nice poem. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I see that everybody is chosing sides. I will not. I only see your side of the story, if he's calling you a liar........you probably lied. Simple as that..... Considering he's shoving it in your face, yea it's a immature sign of bitterness. Oh well, but the poem itself was nice. NO chosing sides here though....not unless I know the whole story.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
Everyone.. I have a new boyfriend my ex is so mad. I said why you have a girlfriend? I know I did something but that doesn't mean he can be mean about everyday when I'm around him! So he can go away!! |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
When me & my boyfriend broke it off...we were friends for a while....then some thing happened...I don't know what, but he changed...he started lieing, acting like he was better then me, and being a total jerk. Well....I really don't know what I was trying to say...I guess that people change...and we all just have to except that... it was really hard...but I got ever it. Well ur poem was great, keep up the awesome work!! Luv Always, ~*~S*W*E*E*T*S*T*U*F*F~*~ How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
dramatic story indeed i as well wont choose sides but you have to turn to someone else now keep on going strong ~JDR "Is it love in my gut, or piss in my bladder?" -Allan Riverwood |
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