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Words_of_Glitter
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0 posted 2001-06-04 02:34 PM


For so long I had held onto my heart, like it was my only worthy possession
Didn't want it to get lost or broken, so I left it unused, until I found you,
Then I had to let it go
Start telling you about feelings that I had never attempted to show
Make you understand that my pride is very valuable to me
But you took my words
And let them go
Within a week, I almost regretted my decision
Because you stole my heart and made a deep incision
Said the words, "I'm so confused. Don't know if I want my ex or you."
Should've just let you go
But by then my heart was already so lost
Decided I wasn't going to give up on you
And got you back, somehow
Made you realize that I am the one who cares
And you just keep going back to her
And I just keep letting it go
But I can't anymore
If, one more time, you screw things up in the relationship that we have
I promise you, I am just going to have to let it go


"Do not marry the one that you can live with. Marry the one you cannot live without."

[This message has been edited by Words_of_Glitter (edited 06-04-2001).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2001-06-04 02:58 PM


WoooooooHoooooooo!! Kick his butt loose! If he can't see how wonderful you are, he doesn't deserve you  
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2 posted 2001-06-04 05:04 PM


Well done here.....I liked this one and like SEA said....well yea like she said hehe.
I hope to see more from yoU! More ok? more!
Well done on this.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Shygirl82
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3 posted 2001-06-04 05:13 PM


Right on...I really liked this one and I totally agree with the message.  Hope everything turns out all right.
Until next time,
~Nikki~

Hill's_Chatabox
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4 posted 2001-07-12 01:57 PM


Yeah I liked this one alot also So far there has not been one that I have not liked, keep it up Love ya lotts Hill

Shoot for the moon cause if you miss you'll still end up in the *stars*!!!

Don't tell me that you love me unless you mean it, Beacuse I might do so

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5 posted 2001-07-27 08:11 AM


This was really cool...written almost like a little story. Man...you should just get rid of this guy, you deserve better!! Great work here, kudos to you!

Jenn

"Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill

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