Teen Poetry #4 |
I Let It Go |
Words_of_Glitter Member
since 2000-10-25
Posts 90USA |
For so long I had held onto my heart, like it was my only worthy possession Didn't want it to get lost or broken, so I left it unused, until I found you, Then I had to let it go Start telling you about feelings that I had never attempted to show Make you understand that my pride is very valuable to me But you took my words And let them go Within a week, I almost regretted my decision Because you stole my heart and made a deep incision Said the words, "I'm so confused. Don't know if I want my ex or you." Should've just let you go But by then my heart was already so lost Decided I wasn't going to give up on you And got you back, somehow Made you realize that I am the one who cares And you just keep going back to her And I just keep letting it go But I can't anymore If, one more time, you screw things up in the relationship that we have I promise you, I am just going to have to let it go "Do not marry the one that you can live with. Marry the one you cannot live without." [This message has been edited by Words_of_Glitter (edited 06-04-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WoooooooHoooooooo!! Kick his butt loose! If he can't see how wonderful you are, he doesn't deserve you |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here.....I liked this one and like SEA said....well yea like she said hehe. I hope to see more from yoU! More ok? more! Well done on this. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
Right on...I really liked this one and I totally agree with the message. Hope everything turns out all right. Until next time, ~Nikki~ |
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Hill's_Chatabox Junior Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 46USA |
Yeah I liked this one alot also So far there has not been one that I have not liked, keep it up Love ya lotts Hill Shoot for the moon cause if you miss you'll still end up in the *stars*!!! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This was really cool...written almost like a little story. Man...you should just get rid of this guy, you deserve better!! Great work here, kudos to you! Jenn "Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill |
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