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CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-06-04 01:04 AM

I wrote this one quite a while back, probably a year or so. It's defiitely not one of my best, but figured I'd post since it's been a few days. Anyway, here it is, let me know how it sounds. (My pic should be over on the side there, too. Bad pic, but oh well.)

...THERE THEY GO

If you feel somehow
Abou someone
And were about to let it out
But you blinked your eyes
...There they go

If you feel that way now
You've got to let them know
Because the next thing you know
They could be gone
...There they go

If you don't tell them now
Maybe you never will
Your mind is with your soul
The two of them don't part
...There they go

You never spoke
Your soul went up in smoke
They never knew how you felt
Your soul feels like it's going to melt
...There they've gone.

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

1 posted 2001-06-04 01:07 AM

awwwwwwwwww..made me feel like crying cody!!

..great poem..i loved the repitition of there they go and the conclusion...good stuff matey!!!
btw nice pic!!....it just makes me feel even colder then i already am..hehehe..thanks for the read!

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-06-04 02:52 AM

Great poem!! I liked it..so nice.
And the pic......heyyyyyyyy it's youuu!
Sup man!
Hope to see more!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-06-04 03:19 AM

great poem...i enjoyed it...sooo thats the person behind the "howdy"

...keep writing cody...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-06-04 07:11 PM

I liked the poem and it's a nice picture

HeAvEnS AnGeL
Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

5 posted 2001-06-05 12:07 PM

i loved it! kepp smiling hunny

and you shouldn't say your pic is bad

i think your a cutie!

Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-06-08 11:44 AM

True words of wisdom

Don't let the moment pass you by
beautiful write
keep sharing

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Val, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Michel

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2001-06-11 11:43 AM

ooo i liked this

nice job!

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