Teen Poetry #4 |
The Wood_Stock Collection : Thinking too much. |
Wood_Stock Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 58The little yellow |
- Thinking too much - Everything I see or do, Seems to spark another memory of you. I miss you girl, I breathe this pain, My mind is burnt, ripped and strained. Try to stand, can only fall, Overwhelmed by the weight of it all. I've had disappointments, but none like this, I lost myself in your departing kiss. All I want is to be with you, Even more, for you to want to be with me too. It seems I'm driving a one-way street, Scared and confused, no longer can I sleep. Don't get me wrong, I know there are other things to do, But you don't seem to put much importance on me and you. Maybe it's an illusion in my head, Or maybe it's because you know I'd wait until I'm dead. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was awesome!! i cant believe no one has replied. Regina |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job here! I really really liked this one. Well done!!!!! I liked it so much! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
OMG! i absolutly loved this! i could relate so much. great job It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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