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The Wood_Stock Collection : Untapped |
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Wood_Stock Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 58The little yellow |
This ain't my best. The flow kinda sucks. But hey! It's a feeling. An overwhelming feeling. Enjoy. - Untapped - For each beginning there is an end, And form each end a new beginning is born. So I wish and wish, on all the stars I'm yet to see, That at the end of this beginning, You begin a new end with me. Lift me up, don't let me fall, Hold me near forever more. As I think of you, you hold me close, Yet in distance we are far apart, Out love so strong, I hold you forever in my heart. So soft and smooth, and warm within, You make life worth living, you mean everything to me. So open your eyes, and free yourself of all the lies, A piece of mind, we seek to find, Lost again, in love so strange, a bond which cannot break. You hold my hand, like you hold my heart, A gentle touch, a warm caress, lips so soft, heaven's bliss. Your inner glow, it warms my mind, It gives direction, to all I seek to find. And what I seek can be found in you, for you mean everything to me. The stars have spoken, our fate is sealed, Awake from the dream, into this world to real. I'd give it all to stay with you, To live in the dream I know so well, I'd sell my soul for you, if I had a soul to sell. For you mean everything to me. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
very heartfelt...i really like dthis poem...the last stanza was awesome...great job...bye  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Some beautiful writing here, my friend. The emotions are so powerful.. exactly what a love poem should be. The first stanza was a great intro. Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
A true love poem here. Wonderful job!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
You hold my hand, like you hold my heart, A gentle touch, a warm caress, lips so soft, heaven's bliss. Your inner glow, it warms my mind, It gives direction, to all I seek to find. And what I seek can be found in you, for you mean everything to me. wow...hey there aussie!!!...this is the first ive read of yours and ihave to say that this is quite good!!..i loove this stanza...its so beautiful..and sweet...and whoever they might be is pretty lucky to have you i must say...  ..looking forward to reading more of your work..
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
so cute!!!!!! well, I liked it. but then, that's just me.I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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PiXiEpUnKeR Junior Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 49IL, USA |
For each beginning there is an end, And form each end a new beginning is born. So I wish and wish, on all the stars I'm yet to see, That at the end of this beginning, You begin a new end with me I love this part!! I can totally relate to it... I can relate to the whole poem!! This is a great concept though in this first stanze... You have a spelling error (just wanted to let you know form should be from). This is the first post I have read from you... but definately not the last... try to check out some of my posts if you get a chnce!! ~Dri |
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Dr. Jo-Bizz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 97 |
what was it winston churchill said? something to the effect of... this is not the end.. .this is not even the beginning of the end... but perhaps it is the end of the beginning... nice job. dr. jo-bizz But His word was in my heart |
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