Teen Poetry #4 |
Fathers Day |
Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
We give this day to our dads to tell them we love them they get cards home made stuff from their young kids they thank us I remember when I was little I'd make something for my dad at school he'd say I love you Minna when I got older I'd give him a card I don't remember the last fathers day with my dad but now he's looking down on me telling me they way to go in life I miss him a lot but he needed to go to heaven on fathers day I will remember him smile all day or try too ~*~Minna~*~ Learning how to walk, Learning how to talk, are the hardest thing to do in a baby life. Learning how to walk for me is the hardest thing to do. |
||
© Copyright 2001 Minna - All Rights Reserved | |||
LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I'm glad that you are going to remember the good times you had with your father and be happy on Father's Day, instead of being sad. I'm sure your father would have wanted it that way. Thanks for sharing. "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
||
Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was heartfelt. I liked it a lot minna. Well done.... I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
||
fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
.....when exactly is father's day??? oh well...hey i liked this poem! twas kool. keeep writing. yay. byyyye. -fear- |
||
anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
very nice tribute...rtouching poem...im soo glad you are positive ...great job Minna...i really liked this poem...bye i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
||
stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
I really like this poem. we do often times take advantage of our fathers. thanks for reminding me of that. *hugs* I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
||
Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You've shown so much heart on this poem Minna. Hats off to you. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |