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Ski*Chick
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0 posted 2001-06-02 11:38 AM


We give this day to our dads to tell them we love them
they get cards home made stuff from their young kids
they thank us

I remember when I was little I'd make something for my dad at school
he'd say I love you Minna
when I got older I'd give him a card

I don't remember the last fathers day with my dad
but now he's looking down on me
telling me they way to go in life

I miss him a lot but he needed to go to heaven
on fathers day I will remember him
smile all day or try too

~*~Minna~*~  

Learning how to walk, Learning how to talk, are the hardest thing to do in a baby life. Learning how to walk for me is the hardest thing to do.

© Copyright 2001 Minna - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-02 11:40 AM


I'm glad that you are going to remember the good times you had with your father and be happy on Father's Day, instead of being sad. I'm sure your father would have wanted it that way. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

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2 posted 2001-06-02 03:37 PM


This was heartfelt. I liked it a lot minna. Well done....

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

fearing-laughter
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3 posted 2001-06-03 12:16 PM


.....when exactly is father's day??? oh well...hey i liked this poem! twas kool.  keeep writing. yay. byyyye.
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4 posted 2001-06-03 12:33 PM


very nice tribute...rtouching poem...im soo glad you are positive ...great job Minna...i really liked this poem...bye

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stace_co2003
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5 posted 2001-06-08 10:00 PM


I really like this poem. we do often times take advantage of our fathers. thanks for reminding me of that.

*hugs*

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

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6 posted 2001-06-11 04:14 PM


You've shown so much heart on this poem Minna.  Hats off to you.  

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic

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