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Godsend_1
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since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

0 posted 2001-06-02 12:16 PM

ok ppl this is kinda like an oldy but a goodie for the ppl that know me that longest you others will just enjoy it or hate it either way is cool have a balst ppl. ben redshaw the great out!!

I am, I am, I am a weapon of choice
I am, I am, I am here by choice
I am, I am, I am a weapon of choice
I am, I am, I am here by choice

I am a weapon of choice
Fighting for my rights
In my own individual way

Beware the weapons of choice
We stick together fight together
And are eternally yours

We are the weapons of choice
Fighting for God in every possible way
Fighting with each other we see is never the way

Satan throwing curve balls
Trying to dislodge us from our pact
I for one wont let that happen

You are my weapons of choice
Friends fighting with me against all apposition
Beware evil doers for we are the weapons of choice

You are, you are, you are a weapon of choice
You are, you are, you are here by choice
You are, you are, you are a weapon of choice
You are, you are, you are here by choice

You are a weapon of choice
Fighting with me against all evilness
Blood pact we don’t need, soul pact we have

You, yes you, and you and you and you
Yes ever you are all soul pact people
Fighting with each other for the good of all mankind

Love my weapons of choice
Love the God we serve
Love one another, love above all else

We are, we are, we are the weapons of choice
We are, we are, we are here by choice
We are, we are, we are the weapons of choice
We are, we are, we are here by choice

And I for one wont let these weapons break

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be.
heh i always thought i was right here

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-06-02 04:20 AM

Ben....this absolutely ROCKS!!! LOVE this!

~SEA

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

2 posted 2001-06-02 11:38 AM

Ditto that! This is a wonderful piece, I love how you use the repitition, and the ending just hits ya like a ton of bricks. Great work, thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-06-02 03:35 PM

This was ok.....Not my favorite by you but that's just an opinion....and opinions will differ from mine

Hope to see more from u.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

TearsOfPearls
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since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

4 posted 2001-06-02 04:20 PM

I thought this was a great poem, and I think it is even greater that you aren't affraid to say your a Chritian!!

Love the poem, keep it up

Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice!

MoeRocko
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

5 posted 2001-06-02 04:35 PM

Yeah that song is pretty cool......

This Is Not Here

How do I know where to go when I don't know which way I'm facing

never_a_princess
Member

since 2001-06-09

Posts 82
Show Me the Money

6 posted 2001-06-12 09:30 PM

*looks at Ewok's reply* Song? it's a song? *hmm* n~e~wayz, I LOVE this one Bennerz! it's really well-written. I'm glad ya posted it..I like how it changes from "i am" to 'you are" to "we are" and stuff! *hugz* gr8 poem hun!
~Anna *waves*

the_rescue
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

7 posted 2001-06-13 08:14 AM

RIGHT on
I'm one of those weapons by your side, I fight with the two edged sword, that piereces the hearts of men, yet unifies those who are with

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN)

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

8 posted 2001-06-13 09:29 PM

I really really really like this poem hun!! it rocks!!

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

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