Teen Poetry #4 |
Lady Anyia |
knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
she weeps so quietly as she sits in her room all alone she is, the lady ghost fair Anyia, i call her name she looks at me with sorrow in her eyes begging me with all her heart her lips dont move yet her words reach my ears "Please..Please..tell my husband i forgive him." with anquish i search this Castle Darkhate a haunted place, never resting i cower in the secret that leads to him before a magic door that i must open on the other side lies the truth the door creeps open and i enter the locked away chambers of the shadow dragon, Darkhate i look into his eyes as hes locked away safe trapped in a glyph from his fair lady the pain and the anquish as he blames himself for the death of Lady Anyia she had gone for help to save her love as the villagers beat him she met her death, and now forever she silently weeps when the news reached the ears of her lover he broke free and became the shadow Darkhate killing them all for his revenge now years later still inprisoned in this glyph with no way out hes locked in time as she waits above i whisper her words into his ear hoping for the chance to ease his soul but not even a flicker changes in his eyes the dragon Darkhate is frozen in time remembering only the times he spent being in love with his Lady Anyia still above i hear her weep as she waits for all eternity just to be with her love, Darkhate “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” Where are you when i need you....? [This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 06-01-2001).] |
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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
Groovay! I like this one. not my fav but good nundaless. Love ya. Keep postin' This Is Not Here |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
This is...great! Really great! Wonderfully great! AHHHHHH!!! I'm putting it in my library. ¤ ¢H@§ïÑg RåIñ ¤ |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I LOVED this sooooooooo much! it's going in my library 2!i really liked the story behide this. it was just great. nice job. fall hard, practice harder not to fall |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I LOVED this sooooooooo much! it's going in my library 2!i really liked the story behide this. it was just great. nice job. sorry for the reprint! fall hard, practice harder not to fall [This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (edited 06-01-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great job...i enjoyed this lots...very loooong poem too ..heheh ...bye tiff i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here. I enjoyed this one. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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