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punkrockerrobin
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0 posted 2001-06-01 04:54 AM


we had a day of fun.
now we break apart.
some go home some go with us,
the party people!

we don't party with beer or drugs.
we party with god!
we have only change.
but the waiter doesn't mind

fries and oinion rings!
yummy but what's missing..........
he forgot our other order!
oh well my friends say.
it was yummy anyway!

with food digesting,
people yawning.
it's time to break apart once again.
it was fun while it lasted.

what time is it i ask.
12 midnight someone says.
goodness last time i looked it was 10pm!
oh well time for bed.
nighty night!
sweet dreams and god bless!

Robin

ok all this is what i did thursday night. we went to johhny rockets it was so much fun!

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1 posted 2001-06-01 07:10 AM


Very different and unique i liked this in some point but felt others could be improved well good job.

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*Tears of faith*
*Never any Tears of hate*

punkrockerrobin
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2 posted 2001-06-01 04:50 PM


ok what's with the silver stars?
robin

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3 posted 2001-06-02 03:47 AM


Well done. Sounds like fun......I liked this!
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4 posted 2001-06-02 04:15 AM


lots of fun...and in Nevada no less....I go to Reno every once in a while...fun place to visit, but I'd guess very hard to live there.....glad to hear no drugs or booze for you!   ~SEA
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5 posted 2001-06-02 11:21 PM


reno is ok if you're 21. still us christian punkers know how to party!
robin

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