Teen Poetry #4 |
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friends forever |
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sexychick Junior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 19Michigan, Bay City |
friends forever we have known each-other for the longest time. we were like sister's we did everything together. we said, we would be friends forever never stop talking to each- other always there to talk to when evr thing went wrong you always listen to my problems never was mean always mad me see the bright side and not the dark side. Things were great friends til the end,but something happened we grew apart. we stopped talking. we even stopped thinking and caring about each-other we found new friends. you moved and went to a different school Things changed and so did we i wonder sometimes were we really friends or was it all a lie now that i sit here i wonder what happen to us being friends forever? This is for my best friend candace i hope she always knows that she will be my best friend no matte what me and her have had bad and good times and i mis them all. |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nicely done...i enjoyed the poem...a great tribute ![]() ![]() i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
What a wonderful tribute to your friend. I enjoyed this one and I'm sure she would too ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
i hope you give her a copy of this piece, and i'm sure she feels the same way. great job on this, wonderful emotion ![]() Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Allan Riverwood![]() ![]()
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nice work... there are people I feel this way about. ![]() ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
beautiful tribute. She must be happy to have a friend like you too ![]() I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!! |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
It's never easy when things like this happen between friends. Hopefully you take bans advice and show it to her. A touching tribute that I am sure any friend would be delighted to read. ![]() ~AF~ Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved." |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was a beautiful poem about what seems to be a very wonderful relationship...very nice ![]() |
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