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May 30th 2001
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May 30th 2001 |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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This poem was inspired by someone i was talking to last night......thanks...... Let the darkness seep into the sunlight vanished vows re-surface after years of infedelity A drunk sits alone in his house regretting all his choices, wallowing in self-pity his children surrond him looking for love look into the futur see that man? look familiar? he's that son turned out just like dad A young girl full of life feels the hands of her father on her body all through out the years of most needed love look at her now on the street corner she's dying you know? killing herself with drugs and men I can see a young woman at the bottom of the ladder putting up with the groping hands of her boss look 5 years from now she's the CEO and founder of a new buisness while that boss is in jail for fraud See this young girl who is writing this poem? 15 years from now she'll be writing and working with great white sharks Life takes twists and turns cruel ones and loved ones but in the end it all works out... Regina "Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay |
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Hidden Junior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 18Lost in my own world |
I love this poem!!! It's so good! ...going to my library... Thanks for the read and keep writing. This one really touched me. **One of the most adventurous things left for us is to go to sleep. For no one can lay a hand on our dreams.** |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Regina- You just keep getting better and better. This one is awesome!What a message. I could hear this as a song. I am extremely impressed. Keep this up. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
The positivity of the outlook in this poem is superb! I surely do hope everything works out!!! I know YOU deserve the best regi *hugs* Great poem!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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dramaqueen22086 Member
since 2001-05-05
Posts 50Hadlyme, CT |
hey this poem really mkes you think about life. if you really think deep enough about it, its a sad poem  there are really ppl out there that live like that. i'm just happy i live in a nice house with a loving family that loves me. i would hate to live like that. besides that i thought it was a good poem. kepp up the good work.  ~!kellie!~ |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great poem...you wrote this one well...i like it a lot...the message was also graet!...thanks for sharing ina  ...bye  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Sharks?  Haha... but seriously, I love the quality of your latest work, Regina! You always write about such fascinating subjects, and your technique is such a compliment to this. I really like what you did with the concept of "hands" in this poem... very, very nice job on reuse of this word. Overall a great poem, but the hands thing is my favourite part. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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