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Godsend_1
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since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

0 posted 2001-05-30 12:31 PM

you say you know the meaning of alone
well you dont
and not many people do

alone is when you say hello
and the person only stares at you
you try and be nice
and they laugh at you

alone is me on the worst of days
on the best of days to
alone is a curse i wish on no one
not even my worst of enemies

the pain of alone is a frozen pain
a dagger made of crystaline ice
stabbed deep into your mind
freezing all emotion

i am alone for twenty-four seven
alone is sitting by yourself at school
cause no one wants to sit with you
just because you are you

alone is the empty feeling
i feel inside
when i know that your not there
to comfort me and hold me and make me glad

alone is the hate that builds up
inside of me
bursting to break out
and kill everyone one

alone is not a word
but a place
a place in hell
where i do dwell

never let anyone be alone

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be..so deal with it
if i am nothing else i am ME

[This message has been edited by Godsend_1 (edited 05-30-2001).]

LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

1 posted 2001-05-30 12:41 PM

Wow, i really liked this one. powerful. i could relate to this. good job.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

2 posted 2001-05-30 03:59 PM

this was really good. i like it. it breaks my heart to see people eating alone like you mention in here. I almost want to go over and sit with them but i don't. not because of what other people will think but because some people WANT to be alone. they don't like being around people. just some food for thought. but good job on the poem. i hear ya loud and clear.

Valerie

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-05-30 07:29 PM

*sigh*...you told it very well...
"alone is not a word
but a place
a place in hell
where i do dwell"...this part just hit me soo hard!...powerful and great job i truly related to the whole poem

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-05-31 01:55 AM

I enjoyed this one. Pretty sad one here. I hope all is well.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

cherish
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since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

5 posted 2001-05-31 03:07 AM

oh wow...this one is nuthing short of powerful dude...if it hit alberta hard it hit me even harder!!...you did well on this...i enjoyed the read ....i loved the words you spoke in it...very well done....man i have to say here and now that readin g poetry is the best!!..

...haha...sorry i had to say that here but i needed to ..and this is the place where it came out...thanks for making my day gs!!

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

6 posted 2001-05-31 09:55 AM

I like this poem alot. I can really relate to it. I hope to hear more from you soon.

Stace

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-06-02 04:35 AM

you have friends here who care......

AngelPoet87
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

8 posted 2001-06-02 10:54 AM

You're not alone Ben.

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

9 posted 2001-06-02 12:58 PM

ben hun you're not alone even though i may be far away you still got me as a friend ok! i did write that poem bout you for nuttin!
robin

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

10 posted 2001-06-06 12:39 PM

whoa i dunno what to say...this poem is awesome! YaY! if u feel this way tho u should talk to ppl...wow i should be a shrink. perhaps i could charge a price...ahh okay enough stupid ranting. i really liked this poem tho. yay u rock!!!
-fear-

Dr. Jo-Bizz
Member

since 2001-06-06

Posts 97

11 posted 2001-06-06 01:02 AM

ben I love you. I wish you lived near me so i could sit with you. this is a good poem. I wish I could write half as well as you.

love,
sister jo

never_a_princess
Member

since 2001-06-09

Posts 82
Show Me the Money

12 posted 2001-06-12 09:42 PM

Bennerz, I love this...you already know my thoughts on this and all your poems, but I wanted to reply anyways *grins* lol..sad poem, hun! but true *nods*~*understands now to some extent what ya meant*..*hugz* keep writing!
~Anna *waves*

never_a_princess
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since 2001-06-09

Posts 82
Show Me the Money

13 posted 2001-06-12 09:43 PM

*argh-it* I forgot to hit the "add to my library" thingy..haha *hugz again*
~Anna *waves*

the_rescue
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

14 posted 2001-06-13 08:17 AM

Right on once again I understand this one too hey Godsend just remember in your state that you are never truely alonde.

The Rescue

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN)

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