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November 28th, 1983 (Allan's challenge)
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November 28th, 1983 (Allan's challenge) |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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Swaddled in soft pink Among screaming baby boys The only girl born. ~Yep, I was the only girl in the entire nursery born at that time...the nurses loved me to death, LOL. Thanks for the challenge Allan, this was fun!  *Krista Knutson* I'm a slow dying flower In a frost-killing hour The sweet turning sour and untouchable... -Natalie Merchant |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
wow... this challenge has really brought out some interesting events! great job Krista! ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
You said it, Jeremy! Jason on Friday the 13th... DancinQueen getting dropped on tha head (lol)... and now this too... I had no idea we all had such interesting stories to share. I'm glad that you gave me the idea for the challenge, Jeremy. This particular one caught me off guard... i don't believe I have ever seen you before this, Alwye. It is flattering that I brought you out of your proverbial cave. ~_^ -Allan Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was so sweet Krista ... I can just picture it, beautifully worded, challenge very well met!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great work, that would be soo weird being the only girl in the nursery, just imagine, about 15 years later and you would be wishing you were the only girl in a room full of males!! Just something for ya's to think about!! Melz!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Now, I really feel like doing the challenge too  Good Job Ms. Moderator  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wow, you truely are one of a kind. Sorry, I had to say something like that, I couldn't help myself nice job on the senryu < !signature-->"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 01-12-2001).] |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Jeremy- Thanks! Allan- I'm always around...it's hard to have time to respond to people and do my moderator duties...especially with limited time during the school year. Thanks for reading and for making this challenge, it was fun! Kit- Thank you much, my friend! Melz- 15 guys?! Not a chance...LOL...one is quite enough...thanks for reading! acire- Thank you! Dopey- Thank ya. Lakewalker- *snickers* Somehow I thought someone would say somethin like that...thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it! *Krista Knutson* I'm a slow dying flower In a frost-killing hour The sweet turning sour and untouchable... -Natalie Merchant |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this gave me a chuckle....i wonder if those boys knew enough to start acting crazy so as to capture your attention!! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Wow. The only girl?? I bet you were screaming to be let out.... hehehe j/k. Nice senryu. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Awww...how cute!  |
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