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Elvenblood
Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

0 posted 2001-05-29 08:35 PM

Take notice of all caitalized words that are NOT the first of the line. Also there are 3 poems in this! I was posessed by an urge to write layered writing. And now I have to brag about it!!! Or so Gwen would say...

Welcome to today
In all it’s beautiful hours
The morning, midway
And night all play
But none ever stay

Tomorrow awaits you
Bearing Rain then Flowers
Move to the sun, start new
Then move away, the sun adieu
The pattern then review

In the Shadows
Beware the fearsome power
See the eastern glow
And follow southern flow
To find Yourself long ago

Of yesterday
Of evil anti-change
Never will it betray
Except for me the stray
Welcome to Today

No angels in heaven nor demons below the sea, could ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

1 posted 2001-05-29 08:42 PM

WHOOOOOOOSH!!!!!!!! *fixes and touches up her hair* that one went WAAAAAAAY over my head. but i like it... LOL hahaha good job

Val

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-05-29 10:41 PM

Very, very cool

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-05-29 10:50 PM

this was very unique...i liked it...and the whole time i was looking for where the three poems divide

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-05-30 12:10 PM

Well done. I liked this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

5 posted 2001-05-30 12:56 PM

I'm lost...it went right over my head. I like it, dont get me wrong! i just don't understand it!! lol
Stace

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

6 posted 2001-05-30 12:58 PM

Oh wait!! I got it!!!!!!
yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Stace

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

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