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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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He doesn’t talk or even look at me. I don’t wanna say goodbye, But I’m tired of being ignored. He doesn’t know how much it hurts, When he refuses to talk to me. It breaks my heart in two, When he acts like I’m not there. Ive held it all in for so long, I can’t take it anymore. It hurts when he ignores me, When he acts like I’m not there. I feel like I mean nothing to him, Almost like he just doesn’t care. < !signature--> www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 01-25-2001).] |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Sad poem. Nicely written though. You expressed yourself well. I hope this persons name is not Justin. But whoever it is I hope it gets better. ~Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I'm with Jason on this one.... this isn't 'bout Justin is it????  Oh, hope not. This is well written, though. And good luck. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This has gotta be about Justin Michael if not, it means you're seeing someone else at the same time that could be the reason why so, tell me this is about Justin what happened? You've been posting so many happy poems about him Now, I see this sad one I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Fearless_Angel Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 57Calgary, AB Canada |
Hey: Great poem. I love the way you expressed yourself so well. I'm sorry I haven't been around enough to know who Justin is but he's obviously someone really special and I hope it workds out for you. Keep writing! Lotsa Love, Angel xoxoxo "Take care and remember a certain innocent lil' Angel will alwayz be there for you..." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hope this isn't about good ol' Justin, and if it is.........then just try to prevail over the bump. Nothing can be all pretty every day.........if you believe in the love....the love will believe in you and over come this whole thing.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
Bravo! Bravo! Gee do I know how that feels!! A lil too well...great job on this one...keep it up! Luv Always, ~*~SweetStuff~*~ How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Well, Dang...I didnt realize I talked about Justin so much  We're doing better...but I'm under stress, cause I haven't seen him outside of school in a month. He's been having problems with his car, and last friday, he brought me home in his moms car, and came in long enough to try to steal my cat...so I hardly count that as "seeing" him outside of school. Thanx for the comments  ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
i hope all is kool between you two. ive read alot of stuff you have written about him. so i hope you get over this "bump" and stay happy. regina |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
oh WOW do I know how you feel *L* Been there done that... it all gets better with time Good work and good luck! |
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DreadedLiver Member
since 2001-01-23
Posts 56Alter, Ego |
I presume Justin is your boyfriend, Im new here I hope things start to change for the better and your writing sends a clear message, nice work. -Knightfellow "If you had a choice to believe in yourself, or another person, who would it be?" |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
What I haven't told ya'll is that the day I wrote this poem, Justin was totally ignoring me @ lunch, and hit me in the face witha fork...ok...its funny....now...it wasn't when it happened...so for V-day, im walking into school, and handing him a fork www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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~*Buffy Summers*~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 24Avondale,AZ,USA |
Good Poem... I can't seem to keep a botfriend... Im pretty and all just have boy troubles I guess. I Like your poem it discribes what your going threw at that moment. I have alot of those moments with a boy named Sleeter hes on the football team. We dated off and on for a year. I guess every since cheerleading ended we just dont act the same towards each other. Maybe its because I Hurt my leg real bad and hade to sit that season out for cheer... Well good job on the poem.... Kim Rayann |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
A fork? Oh dear Tamma spoons work much better on the skull. Personal experience but we wont go there. lol Its a nice gesture..I'm sure he'll see the funny side in it.  ~AF~ "Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment." Buddha |
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