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Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

0 posted 2001-01-25 02:51 PM

Blistering hatred
for the coils
on which my soul dances
The soil that my seeds
were planted in
poisoned my roots
by it's deviate tongue
And therein lies my tragedy
As I embark on
endless night
and dark contemplation
Brooding spells
to veil my confusion
and the disaray
of my disenchanted spirit
I am merely a child
who embraced the unknown
without ever knowing
it'd swallow me whole

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I am no one if not myself.

Angel of Darkness

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Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

1 posted 2001-01-25 06:04 PM

Well, I'm not too sure about the title, but the poem was interesting. Could you explain a little? It might flow easier if you head me in the right direction, thanks.

xoxo
Jenn

"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

2 posted 2001-01-25 07:04 PM

wow powerful.

Isabel Galaxia
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since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

3 posted 2001-01-25 08:03 PM

Great poem, quite powerful. Can I inquire about the title...?
Bel

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

4 posted 2001-01-25 11:17 PM

The title...well...I asked Dopey_Dope for some cool words cuz I couldn't think of a title. He thought of jell-o and I came up with sex dice. Kinda tells you where our minds were. lol I hope I haven't offended anyone, but you know...it happens. Thanks for your replies.

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I am no one if not myself.

Angel of Darkness

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Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

5 posted 2001-01-26 12:22 PM

Extremely powerful and enchanting...seemed like a rendezvous with the occult to me...the title is a little odd, but the poem itself is great! Good work!

*Krista Knutson*

I'm a slow dying flower
In a frost-killing hour
The sweet turning sour and untouchable...
-Natalie Merchant

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-01-26 05:18 PM

Haha I didn't know I helped you out hahahaha..........Dude, I oughta do that with titles from now on. This title ROCKS! Completely!!!!!! Jell-0 and Sex Dice.....wow.
The poem was great too.......
Good job on this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

7 posted 2002-03-15 10:49 PM

Damn girl.... powerful.

~ Titus

I'm dealing with too much.... I'm loosing control.

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