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anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

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0 posted 2001-05-29 01:15 AM

"an oldie...hope you guys like it and reply"

in this heart
of endless solitude
to depths of sadness
never has my heart
seen such grief so bottomless
as my heart dims
of this restless sorrow
in these days of distress
only to realize that to live
as days pass
seems to reflect my heart
to this life’s nothingness

november.29

"the es and ess ryms came out like that as i was writin"

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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JBaker515

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1 posted 2001-05-29 01:17 AM

alby,
this one was great..
awesome emotion should here..
now you should keep writing..
and hey, try to write something about love?
jeff

[This message has been edited by JBaker515 (edited 05-29-2001).]

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

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2 posted 2001-05-29 02:20 AM

I enjoyed this one greatly albert. Well done on this one. i felt it hard....right in the chest.
Nicely done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

HeAvEnS AnGeL
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The Hot Girl From Canada

3 posted 2001-05-29 02:31 AM

Alby hunny! Great poem!! Very very sad though. i hope things worked out in that situation. love yah hunny. kisses

Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes.

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

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Limbo

4 posted 2001-05-29 11:01 AM

Very deep, Albert. I had to read this a few times through to get the whole message and even then I can't help thinking something is missing.
It's being added to my library so that it can be studied and read every day.

~AF~

Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved."
-Van Kaam

anonymousfemale
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Limbo

5 posted 2001-05-29 11:02 AM

Go my ability to press the library button!!

~AF~

Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved."
-Van Kaam

Marshalzu

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Lurking

6 posted 2001-05-29 11:18 AM

Great work Albert, very deep and hard hitting, one for the library...
Friend Zu? Indeed he is

Zu

Ina
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7 posted 2001-05-29 11:31 AM

this was bootiful!!!! wow! this is a definite library piece.

Regina

"Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay
To say these words to you"bon jovi

the_rescue
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Japan

8 posted 2001-05-29 12:01 PM

Albert even though your anonymous that poem was good I liked it.

Peace

The Rescue

Sven

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9 posted 2001-05-29 07:11 PM

wow. . . this just shows a great depth of feeling. . .

good job albert. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

LoneWolf
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10 posted 2001-05-29 10:52 PM

Wow this was great. i loved it. i could relate to this entirely. great work, it going to my library

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

xShUgArHiGhx

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

11 posted 2001-06-02 12:50 PM

This had so much behind it....truely an excellent job here hun

Im glad you decided to re-post it!

stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

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In a dream world

12 posted 2001-06-07 09:46 PM

Alberta, I like this poem. you have true talent. I hope to hear from you more in the future. and stay insane, it's fun!!!!!

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

cherish
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swimming in fairy floss...........

13 posted 2001-06-08 03:55 AM

s days pass
seems to reflect my heart
to this life’s nothingness

aww alberta *hugs*..you're an awesome writer you know that?...beautiful yet sad words my dear friend...it touched my heart..keep posting...and hopefully i wont be the last one to read it..hehe..well done buddy..agpfagp!

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

PiXiEpUnKeR
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since 2001-06-06

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IL, USA

14 posted 2001-06-08 07:03 PM

I love the "restless" part... such a descriptive word... very emotional poem... Good work!

DarkAngelOfTheStars
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since 2001-04-21

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15 posted 2001-06-08 07:09 PM

nice job here i really liked it! good job. *hugz*

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

Dr. Jo-Bizz
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since 2001-06-06

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16 posted 2001-06-09 12:44 PM

yeah...could tell it came straight from your heart...

dr. jo-bizz<<< feels stupid every time I post

But His word was in my heart
like a burning fire
Shut up in my bones;
I was weary of holding back,
And I could not.

Acies

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17 posted 2001-06-11 04:36 PM

ALbert, this is very impressive.
~*applauds*~
thanks for the beautiful read
keep sharing

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic

Shygirl82
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since 2001-02-19

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Ilinois

18 posted 2001-06-11 04:41 PM

I liked this one..it was a little sad..but it was written beautifully. Cant wait to read more....
Always,
~Nikki~

Angelwings
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19 posted 2001-06-11 07:27 PM

what a wonderful piece! I enjoy your work, such honesty in them. Continue sharing and I'll continue reading (Deal?) heheeh

*that what does not kill us makes us stronger!*

*Everyone can deal with pain in their own way, some things are just harder than others!*

fractal007
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20 posted 2001-06-12 01:11 AM

Albert:

Good job. This sounds a little like the mood of my recent poetry, lol. Glad I am not alone. Good job here.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

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