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CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-05-28 08:12 PM

This one has also been in my binder for a while. I wrote it a while back... Some things were going on that I just thought that people treat eachother way too unfairly... Some people just like to fight, not even caring who or what for. Let me know what you think.

THE WAR OF LIFE

Sometimes life can
Be so great
You forget that this world
Is so full of hate

Satan may win the battle
But God has won the war
Sometimes life makes you forget
Who you're fighting for

Every battle
Has it's wounds and scars
Fighting back won't promise
Eternity above the stars

Try to remember
What you're fighting for
Keep in mind that the battle
Won't always affect the war

Every time that you say a word
Think if it will hurt or heal
That's the problem with the world today;
Some don't care how others feel

- Cody -

Living From Memories
Living From Thoughts
There Are Some Things In Live
That Cannot Be Taught

sexychick
Junior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 19
Michigan, Bay City

1 posted 2001-05-28 08:20 PM

hey thats a great poem i hope to read more from you, its great work

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-05-28 08:50 PM

very real message a true one also...great job...i enjoyed and liked this poem greatly...hope to see more

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i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-28-2001).]

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-05-29 01:29 AM

Nicely done here. I liked the message within this one!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

HeAvEnS AnGeL
Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

4 posted 2001-05-29 02:25 AM

Hey hun, I really liked this poem. You got the message across perfectly! It's so going in my library! keep smiling

Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes.

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

5 posted 2001-05-29 09:46 AM

This was such a truthful piece. Sadly, there are so many ignorant pplz out there who don't really give a **** what other ppl feel..But I believe that in the end, good conquers all evil. Great piece!!

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

6 posted 2001-05-29 10:44 PM

I like the ending message, it was very nicely done.
Also I can understand what you are saying with "Satan wins the battle, God wins the war." I translated these terms into "evil" and "good" just so that I could accept them.

You did a nice job on the poem, this contains a rare piece of advice that should be more well known.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

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