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Dark Angel: Tragic Hell (8 of 11) |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
I come home to my hell My very own I’m not welcome in this house So I’ll leave without a goodbye I head for the door with tears in my eyes “Don’t wait for me” I was about to say But their faces gave me that look… …It said, “Go away” With utmost fear I turn the lock Shaking with my every breath I’ll never be seen again Even until my very death No emotions on their faces As I take one last look “(edited) you all” I scream a I run off into the cold I may seem so bold But damn it I’m scared Where will I go? How will I live? I wont The thought crosses my mind As I remember the tree The noose I my only friend it loves my misery With all my energy I take one last leap “I’m not dying tonight, that can wait” And that Everyone Was the end Of my tragic hell "It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ< [This message has been edited by Dopey_Dope (edited 05-28-2001).] |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
tony, yay for the poem! told ya that u gotta edit it though. great work..i really liked this whole series. keeeep posting. -fear-(bergundy) yes fear me lol |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done, Watch the language though.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
I take one last leap “I’m not dying tonight, that can wait” And that Everyone Was the end Of my tragic hell This part is excellent. Well done.  ~AF~ Know what you want. Become your real self. |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
good job i liked it im trying to find all of them! lol  Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful job...i enjoyed this a lot...well written...hope to see more  ...?i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Well, it's maturing very nicely...i must go track down your sprawling genius... Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
greta job on this one....its branching out too...i happy to see |
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