Teen Poetry #4 |
Dark Angel: Life of the Damned (7 of 11) |
Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
Hope Unknown to me I need to find what is real Spinning in circles My life I going no where No where to turn Nothing to feel Wanting Waiting to die Somewhere Anywhere I’ll vanish Gone forever No one will notice Because no one will care Nothing matters now Did it ever? I have no idea Of who I am Who I was No icy breath from me On expression No emotion Nothing No one is there No one ever was No hope No remorse Only death and misery Welcoming me in Where to? No where No place can hold my thoughts No dreams for me Can’t you see? I am nothing No body No one I am not here No there Not anywhere I am gone "It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ< |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
This has proved to be a very interesting series you've been writing. I enjoy every single one of the poems. Good job, I can't wait to see what you have planned for the finale poem f zzy zzy "The heart can think of no devotion |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i liked this one...sad (as all the series is)...its similar yet all different in their own uniqe situation that its written...hope to see more ...? i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done. I enjoyed this one. Kind of edgy, but a good poem. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Wooo...Very good. I loved the feelings in this piece. The thoughts were very creepy which is always good. ~AF~ Know what you want. Become your real self. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
...off to read the next one..
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