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Poet on Acid
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since 2001-01-07
Posts 325
Florida, USA

0 posted 2001-05-27 09:49 PM



Hope
Unknown to me
I need to find what is real
Spinning in circles
My life I going no where
No where to turn
Nothing to feel
Wanting
Waiting to die
Somewhere
Anywhere
I’ll vanish
Gone forever
No one will notice
Because no one will care
Nothing matters now
Did it ever?
I have no idea
Of who I am
Who I was
No icy breath from me
On expression
No emotion
Nothing
No one is there
No one ever was
No hope
No remorse
Only death and misery
Welcoming me in
Where to?
No where
No place can hold my thoughts
No dreams for me
Can’t you see?
I am nothing
No body
No one
I am not here
No there
Not anywhere
I am gone

"It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ<

© Copyright 2001 Tony Ryan Johnson - All Rights Reserved
fozzyozzy
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since 2001-03-15
Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia
1 posted 2001-05-27 09:55 PM


This has proved to be a very interesting series you've been writing.  I enjoy every single one of the poems.  Good job, I can't wait to see what you have planned for the finale poem

f zzy zzy

"The heart can think of no devotion
Greater than being shore to ocean
Holding the curve of one position
Counting an endless repetition"
Robert Fr

anonymous albert ?
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2 posted 2001-05-27 10:03 PM


i liked this one...sad (as all the series is)...its similar yet all different in their own uniqe situation that its written...hope to see more ...?

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope
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San Juan, Puerto Rico
3 posted 2001-05-28 01:46 AM


Well done. I enjoyed this one. Kind of edgy, but a good poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
4 posted 2001-05-28 02:52 AM


Wooo...Very good. I loved the feelings in this piece. The thoughts were very creepy which is always good.

~AF~

Know what you want. Become your real self.
~ David Harold Fink ~

cherish
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since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
5 posted 2001-05-28 09:51 PM


...off to read the next one..




"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

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