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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
I've come to peace with myself Took my anger off the shelf I've accepted the fact that I am Can you accept the fact that I have? Are you denying that you're not like me? Do you think I can't see? I know you'll never agree You are the better You are the best I know you can get nothing off your chest You can never have a peaceful rest. I've accepted the fact, I can confess Don't tell me that I'm the mess Tell me now who is gold Who's excuses are old... This Is Not Here |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
The title is shear genius! I think you could've left the actually poem blank, and just used that title...Anyway, good poem. Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
graet title  ...and i quite enjoyed the read...great job and thanks for sharing it...keep writing  ...?i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done on the poem......the title was weird......does it mean anything?  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
i really, really liked this poem, i like almost all of your poems  keep smiling :PDon't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Awesome title.  The poem is good but not one of my faves from you. Well done anyway. ~AF~ Know what you want. Become your real self. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hahaha I know something Dopey doesn't know!! hahahah!!! Awesome poem!! ~Carly "Go outside and use your own eyes. You'll be surprised to see things you've never been taught..." |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
that is a great poem, but I'm also wondering what the title is supposed to mean... or is it just a bunch of random letters? but, great job!!  *s* Stace I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
WYSIWYG What You See Is What You Get Good job on the poem "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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